When I Look At You

That's right. Jenny just wrote a song. It's not very good. Well, at least in my opinion.

You see, I've been a romantic mood lately, and I've been wanting to write a song for a while now, so finally I did it. It's called When I look At You. I think it's really cute. Most of it comes from experience except for some parts. Ok....maybe a line or two comes from my life. The rest just makes me happy. Would you like to read the lyrics? Good. Because here they are. I would most love some feedback... So I can make it even better!

One thing about it, it has kind of a weird rhythm, so if it doesn't sound right, don't worry. It sounds better with the music. And sorry I say started and begin and and too much. :)

The chorus is in Green.

I talked to you yesterday.

You seemed like you weren't okay.

And when I asked, you looked at me,

And started to say

When I look at you

My heart it begins to race.

When I look at you

A smile appears upon my face

Your eyes, they begin to shine

And then they slowly start to look at mine.

When I look at you.

You tell me I'm beautiful

I say that you're too thoughtful

As I look down, you lift my head.

Begin to smile, and yet again you said.

When I look at you

My heart it begins to race

When I look at you

A smile appears upon my face

Your eyes, they begin to shine

And then they slowly start to look at mine

When I look at you

You hold my hands, you hold my heart

A warm embrace, that says we'll never part.

When I look at you

My heart it begins to race

Yes a smile grows upon my face

When I look at you

My heart it begins to race

When I look at you

A smile appears upon my face

Your eyes, they begin to shine

And then they slowly start to look at mine

When I look at you

When I look at you

When I look at you

I'll say I love you.

It'll probably change soon. Some of the lines. Or it will be longer.

Feedback.

Thanks.